one day (图)


one day

i was holding

my penis

&

come to understand

the whole scope of

post-modernism

 

+

z z

 

note: Some iguanas have a third eye that helps regulate how long they expose themselves to the sun (flash credit: fUSION).

z.z. 发表评论于
行为艺术 :))))

not really ... i didn't "perform" it to an audience ...

haha.....u funny!!
地中海人鱼 发表评论于
行为艺术。。。
作舟诗集 发表评论于
wx000,

glad a male friend can translate a poem like this ... :)))

like your variation too!

you are funny!!!!

zf,

路在脚下。。。冲啊。。。:))


~&~
z.f. 发表评论于
灵与肉。。。(主义多多,哪个主义“WHOLE”???)

这首诗的WHOLE BODY:

灵 (picture/flash)

肉 (poem)

足 (note)

路在脚下。。。冲啊。。。:))

(我在想如果每个人都成了灵与肉的整体,这个世界岂不有可能变共产主义?????? 到时岂不是没了幽默。。。。。。
wx000 发表评论于
trying to translate it

一天
我正握着
我的阴茎
猛然
对后现代主义
大澈大悟
z.f. 发表评论于
laugh and think and laugh again ...

艺术/诗歌让人感觉愉快感觉痛快,还因为它的反叛精神。。。这首诗里的痛快之感在于反叛。。。
wx000 发表评论于
haha.. 模仿一下

one day
i was holding my pink slip
&
come to understand
the whole scope of
capitalism

@ @
^
z.f. 发表评论于
"real humor, i think, has wisdom in it besides what makes people laugh and think and laugh again ..."

I AGREE!!!!!

艺术/诗歌在我的心中很美很纯净很享受。。。不然我为什么要读诗歌???

这首诗,如果没读 note,没有因为配图和note 里的提示让我想起“觉”和“觉”里的另一副插图的话,我不会觉得真幽默。。。

laugh and think and laugh again ...
z.z. 发表评论于
幽默 and 搞笑 are two different things, i think....

the word "搞" has very negative connotations, to me at least....think about it ... it shows the casual, so-so quality of the action as well as the result...

its equivalent in English might be "get" ... get this, get that, etc..

real humor, i think, has wisdom in it besides what makes people laugh and think and laugh again ...
z.f. 发表评论于
但是真正的幽默诗应该是最难的吧。。。诗人提倡“幽默”诗???

“one of the things lacking in modern Chinese poetry is humor。。。 ”很正常吧,诗歌是否也搞笑?对不起,我对待诗歌的态度是不是太严肃了点儿。。。请指正。。。

I read the WHOLE BODY of the poem (the picture/flash, the words and the note...)

读完觉得很好笑很好笑。。。

期待你写首诗,能让咱们直勾勾地瞧一瞧。。。:)

好难啊。。。:(

:)

:(

::

:))

happy friday!!!
z.z. 发表评论于
i know friends on here all have a good sense of humor ...

laugh, laugh whenever you can ....!!!

one of the things lacking in modern Chinese poetry is humor, i think ....

many of our poets are wrapped up too tight, or too fragile to withstand criticism ....
z.f. 发表评论于
good sense of HUMOR

no wonder you have such a good TASTE

eat well!!!

remind me the art by alex grey you posted in your article "觉" ...

a human being has more than one thousand eyes...

IT is always there...

cannot help laughing:))))))))))))
y.y. 发表评论于
hahahaha :) you're in!!!
z.z. 发表评论于
:))))

i am all for a woman's rights to attack any ism !!!!!
y.y. 发表评论于
love it!!!

for fun :)


Someday

I was naked
in the morning sun

&

seeing the scars
on my body
left by surrealism

: indeed surrealism "enjoys" "dissecting" woman body :)
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