I couldn't remember willow's waving hand
Nor I recall where by the lake you stand
We wandered and sit till fall of night
And decided to camp on this escape land.
I couldn't remember the color of the day's sky
Nor I recall those words you lie
In dreams I made myself repeat loud
With tears awake of me never were you proud
Adagios 发表评论于
回复铁拐鲤的评论:
8 over 14 is 57%, I am just a tiny bid over halfway to sonnet.
BTW, few people here enjoy English poems. You are one of few exceptions. Your excellent English must have also brought you some additional joys!
铁拐鲤 发表评论于
回复Adagios的评论:
噢,i thought you made this painting:). you set me up,企鹅,hehe。。 kidding.