1 "No wonder US was the fist one implemented it,”-->“No wonder US was the fist one THAT implemented it,”
2 "not just for military but also civil application."-->"not just for military but also CIVILIAN APPLICATIONS. "
3 "US has decided to insert artificial error into GPS signals served for civil application"-->"THE US HAD decided to insert artificial error into GPS signals for CIVILIAN USES"
4 "with that artificial bandage comes with error of 100 meter"-->"with that artificial bandage CAME AN error of NO MORE THAN 100 meterS"
5 "There were lots of discussion in Europe at that time, many preferred Glonass over GPS, for a. it's closer b. no artificial error"-->"There WAS A LOT of discussion in Europe at that time, many preferred Glonass over GPS, for a. it WAS closer b. IT HAD no artificial error"
6 "to prevent unfriendly countries taking advantage of it"-->"to prevent unfriendly countries FROM taking advantage of it."
7 "China didn't have any friend, and it cannot trust US nor Russia."-->
"China didn't have any FRIENDS, and it COULD not trust US nor Russia."
8 “because China wants those designated areas are at least covered all the time.”-->” because China wants AT LEAST those designated areas TO BE covered all the time.”
9 “more room to grow than those counter parties in Japan, Korea,”--> “more room to grow than THEIR COUNTERPARTS in Japan, Korea,”
10 “but over-exaggerating achievements and even lying about improvement to an extend, that it totally blows things out of proportion,” --> “but over-exaggerating achievements and even lying about improvement to SOME EXTENT, AND totally BLOWING things out of proportion,”