《给你,以化心》哲理诗'回音体'配译

《给你,以化心》


《给你,以化心》
哲理诗 Poem by 北美红袖 文学城
”回音体“配译


常不能给你以华丽

多是悬心伏气  春朝秋夕

浪迹江湖混饭吃

Hate my phrases lined envelopes no amaze n touches

Livings to make earth and universe, in poems

Spring is my morning, yet golden falls shines at lakeshore sunsets.

 
但我仍想
给你一束阳光
以无可救药的痴情
以雪地里迎风的倩笑

All to you,

A ray of sun light,in your deepest eye,

in coldest snow, warms me, your smile,

给你一阵微风
以束发蓝簪的春香
以泪痕化成的春花

A wind breeze I hear the heart-beats

Loving teardrops never dry,

给你一弯月
以轻轻低低的叹息
以眸中千缠百绕的迷恋

A moon, so quiet, soft, watches high above,

Lonesome shadows, distant but sigh,

给你一团火
以青山的高义,流水的温柔
以大贞大信于生命的爱

A fire, was your poem writes day and night.

cut into the mountains, as the river in the lands, 


为你,人淡如菊
为你,浩歌长林
为你,扶醉痛饮
为你,眼波流盼
以报答你的义气和关情
All for you,
just to paint you a flower, walk in the fields miles after miles

All for you,
countries nad towns, I sing along the road, echoes in valley,

All for you,
Smiles and dances party ends In a "Starry Starry night"

All for you,
Deep looks, a yellow house, A window opened behind


香醇也好,清淡也好

我们一同且走且醉且歌且眠

等大海回澜,丘壑流转

A bottle of wine, A trampling a kiss,

Walks, we walk, songs we sang in the night,

Our dreams, lines after a line, A light house flashes light ( in sight )


谁都知道

枯荣都是本份
没有不凋的桃花
我只想配合你,四季,和土地
完成我们的故事

I know, Oh you're my richest land!

cherry blossoms, but Fades in Valentine!

Seasons dies, but let Stories, printed, (beinked n rewind?)

Harvest seeded Only in spring time,

Oh you're my richest land!


此时此刻,我们

既是山边的一对青石,因近泉而净心

又是天上的两朵游云,因不回而辽远

The moment we hold, thus Close, tight,

A pair of rock, Clean n' white, washed in river next spring same time

Two clouds n’ love songs inked in the sky n high


一语湖边
二月 2012 于回音谷
 a few words added days later, ..


 

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忍不住,直译一版
To You, with Melting Heart

Could not give you splenders
other than suspense or floater, spring dusk or autumn dawn
Just try to make a so so living

But I still want to devote

a ray of sunlight to your infautation
with a cute smile in cuddling snow

a breeze with blue fragrance of spring
with teardrop petals of spring

a curve of moon with ever so soft lips
and ever so interwined glances

a ball of fire with sake of mountains' height
with sake of water's tenderness
and with all of love from the grandest life

For you, light-hearted as flowers
For you, soprano that sours through woods
For you, dunk in the drinks
For you, waves of intriguing gaze
just thank your brotherhood loyalty and love

However fragrant wines are, however plain water is
together we walk, we sing, we get drinks and we get drunk
waiting for the waves to curve back, for hills to roll forward

It is meant to blossom, it is meant to wither
But I want to colloborate
with lands and with four seasons
to complete our stories

To this moment, we
stand as pair of rocks, purified by streams
float as pairs of clounds,streching further with no return
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