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characterized by doing or tending to do exactly what one wants, especially when this involves pleasure or idleness."a self-indulgent extra hour of sleep"
synonyms: hedonistic, pleasure-seeking, sybaritic, indulgent, luxurious, lotus-eating, epicurean; More intemperate, immoderate, overindulgent, excessive, extravagant, licentious, dissolute, decadent"the kids in that group are all rich and self-indulgent"antonyms: abstemious -
(of a creative work) lacking economy and control.
Purple prose: What it is and how to avoid it.
Purple prose is the name given to writing — or, well, prose– that’s just too flowery and too melodramatic for its own good. In other words, just way too much.
“Why would purple prose be a bad thing?”
Well, it clouds the meaning behind your writing and, frankly, doesn’t flatter the writer very well. By its sheer verbosity, purple prose can turn off your reader greatly– which is not a good thing to do if your reader happens to be your professor.
That being said, there actually is no ultimate, absolute definition of what constitutes prose, nor is there a definite list of symptoms. Figuring out whether you have in fact fallen victim to purple prose is often a subjective decision– one person’s purple prose may be another person’s vivid description. Unfortunately (or, fortunately, depending on who you are), this is largely a judgment call.
However, that is not to say that there aren’t basic ground rules to follow; this isn’t a free-for-all. (Sorry!)
So, here are a few things to keep in mind in order to avoid purpling your prose too much:
Avoid words that are too big and fancy. Obviously, there is merit to being erudite and eloquent. However, there is a difference between using a particular word because of its precise definition and using it because it makes you sound smarter. Be honest with yourself, your own writing style, and pay attention to the task at hand. It’s easy to spot when a student is using difficult words for the sake of using them– trust me, I know. Everyone has a particular writing style that is rather distinctive– much like someone’s speaking voice. So, when a student puts on airs, it’s much like someone you know well suddenly speaking in Muppet-voice. And it’s that much more obvious when unnecessarily difficult words are used where clear, simple wording would suffice.
Keep the urge to write flowery, overly vivid descriptions at bay. Descriptors are used to make the reader visualize what you’re describing. However, there is such thing as written sensory overload. Not sure what I mean? Well, here is an example:
The Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest is an annual contest held by the English Department of San Jose State University. The contest challenges entrants to write the opening lines of the worst possible novels. Of course, each year’s submissions are hilariously bad renditions of “good fiction.” While they are opening lines to non-existent fiction (how is that for a double negative?), they are also excellent exercises in flowery writing, or purple prose.
This is the 2008 grand-prize winner of the Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest:
Theirs was a New York love, a checkered taxi ride burning rubber, and like the city, their passion was open 24/7, steam rising from their bodies like slick streets exhaling warm, moist breath through manhole covers stamped “Forged by DeLaney Bros., Piscataway, N. J.”
Um, what?
First off, thanks for making New York sounds gross(er). Second, there are way too many descriptions–far more than what’s necessary. This, in all its flowery craziness, is an example of vivid imagery gone awry– this, my dear readers, is purple prose.
Avoid self-indulgent writing. Another clue to whether the writing is overdone is that it draws attention to itself rather than to the story. If you find yourself thinking, “By golly, that’s a lovely phrase”, then you’re in trouble. If the phrase is self-indulgent and is far more about your own cleverness than it is about your topic itself, then it has to go. This is, according to
William FaulknerSir Arthur Quiller-Couch*, is called “murdering your darlings.” In his series of lectures titled On the Art of Writing from 1916 (!), Sir Quiller-Couch wrote: “Whenever you feel an impulse to perpetrate a piece of exceptionally fine writing, obey it–wholeheartedly–and delete it before sending your manuscript to press. Murder your darlings.” Nicely done.Of course, that is not to say that you have to slaughter or even dump every phrase you are particularly pleased with. You are allowed to marvel at your own genius, yes. So, if there is a phrase in mind that borders on possibly too much, think: if the phrase serves your topic well, it stays but, if it doesn’t, buh-bye. It’s that simple.
*William Faulkner is frequently attributed to the phrase “kill your darlings” when, in actuality, it was Sir Quiller-Couch who coined it. The more you know.
http://theadvancededit.com/academic-writing/purple-prose-what-it-is-and-how-to-avoid-it/ (assessed on Aug. 18, 2015)
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Rick Riordan
Self-Indulgent Storytelling: On Writing for Yourself versus Writing for an Audience
Art by Pamela Colebourn
Have you ever met those people who can’t seem to stop talking about themselves, or what happened with their spouse, their kids, etc.? Yeah, that’s not storytelling. That’s called a cry for attention, complaining, and/or self-indulgence. It’s most apparent on Facebook and some blogs. Facebook is the master of self-indulgence. And if you go to a blog and the blogger talks about themselves more than things others might find interesting, it’s called a self-indulgent blog. Storytelling, by definition, is the art of telling a story to entertain someone else.Of course, we all indulge ourselves in some form or another. We have a right to be happy. But that’s not entertainment. That’s not storytelling. It’s just us being part of the audience.
What’s an example of an entertaining story? Try: “You won’t imagine what I saw on my way back home the other night. I had to walk because my car broke down. All the lights were out and I only had the light from my cell phone. My battery was running low and I could only guess I was going in the right direction. Finally, just as I was about to walk into a lit street, there in the bushes, I saw…”
It’s got a few elements that grab attention: 1) suspense, 2) fear, and 3) dealing with a tricky situation. A self-indulgent version would be:
“Urgh, I had to walk home last night after my car broke down. Such a piece of junk. The entire street was blacked out too, it was so frustrating. My stupid phone kept dying and I just wanted to cry. My boyfriend wouldn’t pick up his phone either, he’s such a d-bag. So then, I was right about to get out of this horrible dark street…”
I’m already asleep. Please, save the punch line. Maybe it will knock you out.
What we have to try to do instead is to make our stories relevant to the person we’re speaking to. That way they’ll grab onto what they want to get from it, and at the same time absorb the rest of the details.
Writing for yourself is like telling yourself a story, and only yourself. There are a few ways to figure out if this is the case:
1) Did you have a person or a group in mind when you were writing the story?
2) Have you imagined how this person/group might react to where the story was going?
3) Have you written scenes in the story that you didn’t necessary want to write but knew the person/group you were writing for might enjoy them?
The key here really is: were you thinking of anyone other than yourself and your characters when you wrote the story? After all, your characters are really an extension of yourself. Yes, it may also be important to make sure they get the best development they can, but sometimes it may not be a wise idea to put them before your readers.
Do you write for yourself or for an audience?
-The Story Addict
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What is Story Addict?
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“My cousin Helen, who is in her 90s now, was in the Warsaw ghetto during World War II. She and a bunch of the girls in the ghetto had to do sewing each day. And if you were found with a book, it was an automatic death penalty. She had gotten hold of a copy of ‘Gone With the Wind’, and she would take three or four hours out of her sleeping time each night to read. And then, during the hour or so when they were sewing the next day, she would tell them all the story. These girls were risking certain death for a story. And when she told me that story herself, it actually made what I do feel more important. Because giving people stories is not a luxury. It’s actually one of the things that you live and die for.”
— Neil Gaiman (Creator of Hugo, Coraline, and Stardust)https://addictivestory.wordpress.com/2013/02/04/self-indulgent-storytelling-on-writing-for-yourself-versus-writing-for-an-audience/ (assessed 08-18-2015)
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钱钟书: Self-indulgent writing
"Have you ever met those people who can’t seem to stop talking about themselves, or what happened with their spouse, their kids, etc.? Yeah, that’s not storytelling. That’s called a cry for attention, complaining, and/or self-indulgence. "
What's self-indulgent?
钱钟书的写作，那是贵族聪明人悠悠然然的演出。常为自己的聪明，笨人愚拙而冷笑。his style is more like self-indulgent, like purple prose, just too flowery and too melodramatic .
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adjective: self-indulgent
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