【七律】黄药师

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青袍一袭玉容奢,箫弄江湖碧海家。
君子穴封鸿渐陆,神通指点雁平沙。
九阴孤啸翩红雨,五行迷踪幻紫霞。
剑铗空鸣声寂寂,俗尘西岳走东邪。


(旧版,经龙座指出,横和弹出律,改后重贴如上,再谢龙座指正)

青袍一袭玉容奢,箫横江湖碧海家。
君子穴封鸿渐陆,神通指弹雁平沙。
九阴孤啸翩红雨,五行迷踪幻紫霞。
剑铗空鸣声寂寂,俗尘西岳走东邪。
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揖谢沁文兄雅赞!十二首红楼菊花和章已脱笔,将逐一贴于诗坛。最近正在构思梅超风。。。
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大赞、特赞!【句句】 皆妙、皆喜。栩栩如生、尤其传神 。。。师兄妙律
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