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梦里是磐石 醒来是沙碛
梦里是炉火 醒来是灰烬
梦里是肌肤 醒来是泥土
梦里是歌声 醒了是石碑
梦醒时分
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回复 '双儿02155' 的评论 : It's, indeed, a beautiful translation! Thank you very much for these elegant and delightful phrases! Especially, I like the rhyme that you introduced, which has been compromised in my original version.
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Dream and Awake
I arise from my dreams
Rock has turned into sand moraine
I arise from my dreams
Fire has burned down with only ashes remain
I arise from my dreams
Smooth flesh has turned into muddy stains
I arise from my dreams
Happy songs left nothing but tombstone ingrain
O I dream the dreams filled with bright
But I arise from my dreams to sleepless night!
注：我是你同学的同学，上述译文是她让我瞎凑出来的.如果译得不好敬请斧正（smile).也欢迎你来访问我的博客.
I arise from my dreams
Rock has turned into sand moraine
I arise from my dreams
Fire has burned down with only ashes remain
I arise from my dreams
Smooth flesh has turned into muddy stains
I arise from my dreams
Happy songs left nothing but tombstone ingrain
O I dream the dreams filled with bright
But I arise from my dreams to sleepless night!
注：我是你同学的同学，上述译文是她让我瞎凑出来的.如果译得不好敬请斧正（smile).也欢迎你来访问我的博客.
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