【原创诗歌】《记者西尔维亚》发完睡觉

大学时期跟我妈去巴黎逛了那几个该逛的美术馆, 就是没有去有启发这首诗的那个, 但随手拿的广告单子里有这副Otto Dix的画的一张小小的图。 不知道是哪里吸引了我, 我一直被这副画吸引着。 

当时我混在原创圈里, 和一群比我小的想学习写歌词租了一个QQ群, 我教他们写词。 其中就有根据这副画写歌词: 

这是我的版本:

(当时只有另外两个写了, 相比起来比较短)

 

《记者西尔维亚》
Otto Dix: Portrait of the Journalist Sylvia von Harden 1926
画中的女人是Sylvia von Harden,一个德国记者和诗人。
画家:Otto Dix
收藏于庞毕度中心
 
记住,这幅画,创作于1926年,在德国,一个残酷的战争结束以后,失去信仰的冷漠的世界。
作者Otto Dix想体现并不是这个女人外在的美貌,而是象征一个时代的一个女人的心理状态。
 
 
【Otto Dix是德国新即物主義最重要的艺术家之一。 】
 
歌词要求:
第三人称,作为一个路人,一个旁观者的角色来猜测这个女人的内心世界。 她想什么?
要结合年代时代背景,把这个女人的思想内容,写成一个故事。
 
这次格式字数行数不规定,但要按照以下的主副歌分配顺序。
 
《记者西尔维亚》

词/

第一幕:
介绍(第一句用到“她到底在想什么?”)
第二幕:
总结(第一句用到“哦她什么都没有想。”)
第三幕:
 
介绍+总结=完
 
 
 
《记者西尔维亚》
作者/王玥星·伊德娜典
星期四,五月九日,二零一三年: 一点一十二分凌晨
 
第一幕:
 
对面那桌的她在想什么
那已经放弃美貌的头发
睡眠中懒散邋遢的眼睛
还有不知第几根的烟头
我猜 她的故事应该是这样的
我想 她的梦曾经是这么写的:
 
战争未搅醒的姑娘
浅色艳丽的小裙子
仍旧充满期望的装扮
长发盘进一顶小帽里
 
整个人生浸在诗的香水
整个未来都丢在信仰里
一定有人告诉过她不对
这一切并不是真的平和
你要 一定要相信它充满虚伪
虚伪 要活在有准备的失望中
 
介绍:
她到底在想什么
梦 曾经的信仰
风 吹动的裙尾
或者是这样的
血 残缺的手腕
雨 冲走的废墟
 
 
第二幕:
战争一定是战争开始了
一个说结束战争的战争
带着圣诞节凯旋的希望
踏入了这死亡的战场
老人 玩笑般严肃胡言乱语
幼年 拉入多少无战事死亡
 
请问对面这位姑娘
你曾经一起向往过
期待过的男孩们多少
还能再回来过圣诞节
 
你是不是才终于想通了
你的梦你的正义掌握在
炮弹和枪眼瞄准器手里
并不在你的渺小的笔下
战争 它终于把你给摇晃醒了
醒了 春梦中的处女终于醒了
 
 
总结:
 
哦她什么都没想
梦 失去的信仰
风 吹走的希望
一切都是必然
血 拔出的残肢
雨 冲走的弹壳
 
第三幕:
 
最后的反抗是停止反抗
最后的仇恨是放弃信仰
飞走的蝴蝶梦随她飞走
流徙的生命帮助它流亡
人生 你已经看到过了残酷
残酷 你也接受了血色死亡
无意了让我的面容
吓醒梦中的做梦者
内心的呐喊已经被我
安静的酒精给溺死了
 
那桌淡漠平静成熟女人
战争的结局让你回来了
不过不是回到你的初梦
不是回到激情的阳光下
没错 就是回到安静的现实
现实 就是你杯中的催眠药
 
介绍:
她到底在想什么
梦 曾经的信仰
风 吹动的裙尾
或者是这样的
血 残缺的手腕
雨 冲走的废墟
总结:
(哦)
她什么都没想
梦 失去的信仰
风 吹走的希望
一切都是必然
血 拔出的残肢
雨 冲走的弹壳
 
 
 
英文版本:
 

The Journalist Sylvia

By: Yue Yidhna Xing Wang

Thursday, May 9th, 2013 1:12AM

 

V.O. in German accent: A nobody's words are worth nothing to a girl with everything to hope for.

 

ACT I:

 

That girl sitting across from me

What is she thinking about?

The stoic hair deprived of imagination and anticipation

The blissfully resting eyelids

And, I don't know how many cigarettes.

I would suspect her story goes like this:

I would imagine, her dream was once not far from this:

 

A young girl, not yet awoken by the coming war

The light flowery dress drifting in a wave of the sun

There was excitement awaiting accomplishment and truth in those delightful attires.

It shows, even in your braided hair under that little hat.

 

Your own breath of living was soaked in a perfume of poetry.

Your future was engraved in an oath for truth.

I am sure, someone have told you it is not right.

What is real, what is the sorrow of the merry pantomime?

You have to believe me, that it is full of flaws.

In lies, you have to live under expected disappointment.

 

Introduction:

 

What was she really thinking about?

A dream? The faith by fault?

Or her youth, swimming around in a flight of wind.

Maybe, it was this.

The blood, and the missing arms.

The rain, and the collapsing edifice.

 

ACT II:

War, yes yes, It must have been war!

Another war to end all war.

To victory before Christmas,

They set foot in the No Man's Land of Sure Death.

How many young voices have been silenced

On the quiet front.

 

Yes, girl sitting across from me,

How many of your friends joined you

For Christmas.

 

Did you finally acknowledge the truth?

Your dream and your justice are not at

Mercy under your ink and quill, but

The brutality of the cannons and guns.

War, it awakened you.

Awakened the virgin from her sleep.

 

 

Conclusion:

 

Oh, she's not thinking about anything!

Dream, she has lost it all.

Wind has blown them away.

Everything is inevitable.

Blood, the lost limbs.

The Rain only washed away the bullet shells.

 

ACT III

 

The final battle was not to battle.

The final hatred was to give up faith.

Let the butterfly dreams fly.

Lead the wandering life to exile.

Life, you have seen all the cruelty.

Cruelty, you have welcomed the red death.

 

No more, let my horrid features frighten and enlighten

The yet unconscious.

The screams have already drowned inside my alcohol.

 

The woman sitting across from me,

The war brought you back.

No, not back to your silly dreams

Your sunshine passion.

Yes, back to the quiet truth,

Truth, that mesmerizing hypnotic drug inside your glass.

 

 

The Final Question and Answer:

 

What was she really thinking about?

A dream? The faith by fault?

Or her youth, swimming around in a flight of wind.

Maybe, it was this.

The blood and the missing arms.

The rain and the collapsing edifice.

 

Oh, she's not thinking about anything!

Dream, she has lost it all.

Wind has blown them away.

Everything is inevitable.

Blood, the lost limbs.

The Rain, only washed away the bullet shells.

 
 
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