冬天的鸟，立在枯枝，轻吟着盛夏的歌
它们不敢大声歌唱
怕惊醒沉睡的树
树要是在此时醒来，发现自己的树叶都掉光了
该是多么悲痛啊
一棵树只应该在春天醒来
我轻轻的从树下经过
解开系在岸边的小舟
撑起长篙
我要去找河里的星星
我奋力靠近
每一次相遇，每一次触手可得
它们都闪烁碎裂
碎裂的星星
你们是不是突然想起来了
你们长途跋涉，落在这片水域
灿烂闪烁的真正原因？
抬头见日，不见长安
Pillar 发表评论于
Another amazing piece of writing! Thank you for sharing!
Vincent van Gogh wrote to his brother in a letter:
“I want to touch people with my art. I want them to say 'he feels deeply, he feels tenderly'.”
I have always wondered how people can tell by looking at his paintings that "he feels deeply, he feels tenderly."
Your writing has often touched my heart deeply and tenderly. I have slowly come to the realization that your writings, or any forms of arts in this matter, can have such a power because the person who creates it must feel more deeply and more tenderly.
I tend to believe this ability is a double edged sword. It gives you the edge to produce the outcomes you desire, for example, the amazing writings you have created, but it may cause, if unrestrained, unwanted physical or mental consequences in other situations.
Vincent van Gogh wrote to his brother in a letter:
“I want to touch people with my art. I want them to say 'he feels deeply, he feels tenderly'.”
I have always wondered how people can tell by looking at his paintings that "he feels deeply, he feels tenderly."
Your writing has often touched my heart deeply and tenderly. I have slowly come to the realization that your writings, or any forms of arts in this matter, can have such a power because the person who creates it must feel more deeply and more tenderly.
I tend to believe this ability is a double edged sword. It gives you the edge to produce the outcomes you desire, for example, the amazing writings you have created, but it may cause, if unrestrained, unwanted physical or mental consequences in other situations.
simplyu 发表评论于
像是喝了五杯咖啡，元神都在晃动。
wuliwa 发表评论于
回复 '稳稳' 的评论 : 啊。小菊次郎，我梦见带他上学路上，他说要去卫生间，结果在那里把水龙头打开，放水玩。把我气哭了。今天早上哭醒的
稳稳 发表评论于
回复 'wuliwa' 的评论 :
看见美女小娃骑车带菊次郎去上学了:) 希望美好的音乐把小娃的烦恼扫光。。。
https://blog.wenxuecity.com/myblog/73507/202002/5811.html
看见美女小娃骑车带菊次郎去上学了:) 希望美好的音乐把小娃的烦恼扫光。。。
https://blog.wenxuecity.com/myblog/73507/202002/5811.html
wuliwa 发表评论于
回复 '带娃是持久战' 的评论 : 谢谢你。终于你又写曲子了
wuliwa 发表评论于
回复 '噢颜颜' 的评论 : 爱你
wuliwa 发表评论于
回复 '稳稳' 的评论 : 写完睡着了，梦见骑车菊次郎去上学，路途遥远，他太不听话了，气哭我了。就醒了。不听话老师和他的爸妈还护着他。啊，抓狂！
wuliwa 发表评论于
回复 '蓝色的小溪' 的评论 : ：）别客气，也谢谢你
wuliwa 发表评论于
回复 '尘之极' 的评论 : 天还没亮：）
wuliwa 发表评论于
回复 '芋头_2020' 的评论 : 抬头见日不见长安：）
带娃是持久战 发表评论于
写的真好 ：）
噢颜颜 发表评论于
谢谢 喜欢这调调 ：）
稳稳 发表评论于
好诗。。。但是，好伤感。。。
蓝色的小溪 发表评论于
好诗 - 无尽的期待，却无所其遇。望尽长空，只是碎裂的星星。即使齐眉举案，又有谁能与之以对呢？张爱玲除了胡兰成还有谁可嫁呢？不一样对层次。醉酒之言，借题发挥，切莫认真。谢谢
尘之极 发表评论于
Starry Night...
芋头_2020 发表评论于
小娃这首诗想表达什么呢？
一日看尽长安花？ ：）
一日看尽长安花？ ：）
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