Frozen ashes
Frozen ashes
from whose bones
left alone
for ages
in the ark
in the dark
But the ashes glow
as white as snow
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Amlu - Powerful brevity with strong imagery. well penned
Great
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Freedom
Bones anchored to tendons
Tendons anchored to muscles
Where is bones' freedom
Ask wind
in which freedom flows
Ask fire
in which freedom burns
Hugs between tendons and muscles
Dances between wind and fire
Bones into ashes
fly and paint the sky gray
© a day ago,
Amlu - A powerful ink on freedom..so creative with strong imagery. How true! bones are not feer at all..Great write making the readers ponder on it.
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Paidge Searchwell - A deep poem bringing on analytical questions. Great work!
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