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《Ideal Friend》《理想的朋友》

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《Ideal Friend》
by CBA7(小西)

he/she is in a corner of this world
near or far
not in an ideal world
but he/she is an ideal friend
brings rainbows in rainy days
silent in sunny days

《理想的朋友》
by CBA7(小西)

他/她在这个世界的一个角落里
或近或远
不在理想的世界里
但他/她是一个理想的朋友
雨天带来彩虹
晴天沉默

P.S. This poem was inspired by Ray Cope, a British poet, and his poem Ideal World below

Ideal World.
by Ray cope

In an ideal world-------
I'm in a cottage by a lake.
A cottage,nestling against woodland.
I'm clad in denim.
I'm shod in wellington boots.
I'm tending a garden:
There's a dog [ perhaps two ] by my side.
And a wise old cat who lurks in the hedgerow.
I'm stooping amidst flowers.
Grubbing happily in the loam.
Contented:

In an ideal world ----
I'm in a canoe, gaily painted.
Out in the water.
A sharp - edged craft of native American ilk.
I'm watching fish rise.
I watch the wild duck bobbing.
I catch the sun on my paddle,
as i glide silently by.
Through water-lilies,through rushes.
Sometimes drifting with the breeze.
Unconcerned:

In an ideal world ----
I'm in a forest,bathed in dappled shadows.
I'm rustling through leaf litter.
I'm snapping twigs underfoot.
I'm listening to birdsong.
And the scamperings of small things.
There's a dog [ perhaps two ] roving ahead of me.
I am in awe of the greenness.
I am the watcher of bees.
I am brother to The Green Man.
Fortunate am i:
【Ray's poem was published on Allpoetry, the largest and best poetry site in the world】

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CBA7 发表评论于
回复 '艾唱' 的评论 : 谢谢大歌星小艾的点评和鼓励。

艾唱 发表评论于
好棒的主题好美的诗,每一个人都希望有一个这样的好盆友。
CBA7 发表评论于
回复 '烟酒嗓' 的评论 : 谢谢诗人歌星的雅临和点评!方块字里面的理想朋友更理想 :)

烟酒嗓 发表评论于
好诗!与上同感!能在方块字间读出图画与色彩,还有遐想~~
CBA7 发表评论于
回复 '可能成功的P' 的评论 : 谢谢P君的点评和鼓励。我是先写的英文版,然后译成了中文 :)

可能成功的P 发表评论于
很美的小诗,更喜欢中文版本。
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