《Do You Remember》(英文)

我今天尝试做了英文版的《记得吗》调试了几版Suno prompts和歌词tags。做出了一版符合我审美并有感染力的摇滚。它的结构要比原中文版更舒展、更丰富些毕竟语言特点不同。中文是极度浓缩的语言,“直接给”就非常有力量了。但英文版这样做会觉得比较跳跃,情绪没到撑不起副歌。真是非常有意思的发现呢!
Do You Remember
Lyrics: Aubrey Morrow (暮子默)
Music/Vocals: Suno
Raindrops still hang on the window glass,
Dead leaves floating where the puddles amass.
Half a song lies still, untouched and undone,
Time won’t wait, and the story has just begun.
Every step feels heavy, worn-out and slow,
Turn around—there’s nowhere left to go.
A heart gone gray, tears inked in black,
It tastes like sorrow, but nothing comes back.
Do you remember that boy with a guitar in hand?
Singing like the world would understand.
His smile lit up the coldest air
Do you remember? He was always there.
Someone’s gone too far, no chance to say goodbye,
Someone’s stuck in place, still learning how to try.
The wind keeps howling, the nights grow long,
We keep on walking, pretending we’re strong.
If you’re tired, just lay your head and sleep,
The moon will guard your quiet dreams so deep.
If you break, then let the silence fall
Even broken hearts still hear the call.
Do you remember that boy with a fire inside?
Singing through the dark, with nowhere to hide.
He played like hope was in his hands
Do you remember? Can you still understand?
And when the sun climbs through the morning haze,
It’ll bring a golden dream to light your face.
You’ll hear that melody again, so true
A quiet song... and he’ll be there with you.