TOUCHING THE WORD
Somewhere in sunset
She sits by the pond
feet dipped in water
Rises from the deep
joy of being alive
fills her body
Wind takes her
hand and touches
her fair skin
where his words
used to be
She blushes
from the thought
Splash splash!
She's awakened
to the curious
fish....
:2/3/05
foto: stuart brown
LTG 发表评论于
happy new year, ah-loo!!
your ID looks familiar...
阿鹿 发表评论于
Happy new year to all three of you!
- 阿鹿
LTG 发表评论于
是啊!
记得,刚学诗的时候,一位教授说过:Stop making sense!
果然有道理的。因为人经常是自作聪明的,是诗的大忌!
祝你新年好!
红豆豆 发表评论于
喜欢这首!喜欢没有哲理,纯感性的诗。
记得刚来文学城时,问朦朦为什么要给“羊头狗肉”置顶。结果起了大半年的风波:)
往事如烟
望世若梦......
LTG 发表评论于
Rises from the deep
joy of being alive
fills her body