A Blue-domer's Prayer
Let's begin
from the begin
ning let's be
gin from the
beginning
let us be
from the be
ginning
let us be
by letting us
begin being
the beginning let
the beginning begin
from being from us
the beginning
begin the beginning
begin from
us let the
beginning
be let the
being begin
from us
let us
be us
let
us
b
e
.
.
.
:: z.z. '04
LTG 发表评论于
影云，不客气！
你对这首诗的理解非常贴切！！！
知凡，
谢谢分享！！！
ＡＡＡＢ，
你的＂仙花＂呢？
：）
影云 发表评论于
To me, this poem captures the transformation of spirituality - - - in a process, what’s coming out of your mouth will finally be meaningless and scattering and then disappearing, but the prayer sinks into self and the inner peace flows.
AAAB 发表评论于
仙女散花。
知凡 发表评论于
I am praying........
Let's begin
from the begin
ning let's be
gin from the
beginning
let us be
from the be
ginning
let us be
by letting us
begin being
the beginning let
the beginning begin
from being from us
the beginning
begin the beginning
begin from
us let the
beginning
be let the
being begin
from us
let us
be us
let
us
b
e
.
.
.
Let us feel life in our hearts.....
Let us feel "meaning"......
知凡 发表评论于
i just read the following, and thought i should share...
Quoth Siddhartha:
"I've had thoughts, yes, and insight, again and again. Sometimes, for an hour or for an entire day, I have felt knowledge in me, as one would feel life in one's heart. There have been many thoughts, but it would be hard for me to convey them to you.
......
Knowledge can be conveyed, but not wisdom. It can be found, it can be lived, it is possible to be carried by it, miracles can be performed with it, but it
cannot be expressed in words and taught.
......
The opposite of every truth is just as true! That's like this: any truth
can only be expressed and put into words when it is one-sided.Everything is one-sided which can be thought with thoughts and said with words, it's all one-sided, all just one half, all lacks completeness, roundness, oneness."
影云 发表评论于
z.z.
Thank you for sharing, very nice!!!
Let me read slowly :)
I really appreciate your review for my poem - - - it does open my mind, not only about that particular poem, but whatever I will write in the future . . .
LTG 发表评论于
hi, y.y., thanx!!
i just read the following, and thought i should share...
[from Nick's blog]
:
Understanding a Poem
"531. We speak of understanding a sentence
in the sense in which it can be replaced by
another which says the same; but also in the
sense in which it cannot be replaced by any
other. (Any more than one musical theme
can be replaced by another).
In the one case the thought in the sentence is
something common to different sentences;
in the other, something that is expressed only
by these words in these positions. (Understanding
a poem)."
"532. Then has 'understanding' two different meanings here?-
I would rather say that these kinds of use of 'understanding'
make up its meaning, make up my *concept* of understanding.
For I want to apply the word 'understanding' to all this."
"533. But in the second case, how can one explain the
expression, transmit one's comprehension? Ask yourself:
How does one *lead* anyone to comprehension of a poem
or of a theme? The answer to this tells us how
meaning is explained here."
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