在影云／知凡／ＷＸ零零零和黄衫的启发下，抛一块砖。This is only a work in process. 诗歌是无限的可能，如"PI"...对母语的敏感，使我们注意到诗在被翻译过程中的各种语言现象，包括乐感等。我的基本目标是，在用中文时，读起来起码不能别扭，听着不能让人起鸡皮疙瘩，除非写 horror stories :)但，个人的能力有限，只有在切磋中听取诸位的见地。I must say that you all make this sharing a more poetic experience! Thanks!
[foto: Kelly Green]
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kool!
good luck! :)
y.y. 发表评论于
yes!!!! a "project" in progress :)
your description is sooooo beautiful ....making my hands itchy :)
. . . crazy? nah, at least to me . . . : ) Beauty does not fall into guidelines:)
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i can imagine that you can easily turn these into a flash or something....with the images slowing fading into the Night's country....to evoke the shadow of pain....past....or even with the rose pedals bleeding into a female nude ....:)
crazy? i know ...:)
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photograph + technology ;)
okay, indeed i am drinking juice now :)
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is this a photograph, or an image you made?
quite nice....!!!
thanx for your generous, creative sharing!!!
cheers!! [but, don't drink in the a.m. :)]
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in Chinese, we seem to be the victims of cliches and old pastiches . . .
agree!!!
it's also fun to learn Chinese in this sharing way . . .
