烟圈儿 （二）
一个夜色重叠着另一个夜色
烟头忽亮忽暗的信号
变的捉摸不定
一个男人的叹息
被烟圈儿锁在黑暗里
他说
我啥也没有了
。。。
别跟着我了
一个女人柔软的长发
一个令人窒息的体温
烟圈儿 （二）
oneline 发表评论于
This one is better than the first one.
Subtle yet deeper. This style is more powerful!
I don't think you should post there, they will not understand
and they may misjudge you as a person.
Just my view.
Keep going, this is a form of creation of art with a few words.
Subtle yet deeper. This style is more powerful!
I don't think you should post there, they will not understand
and they may misjudge you as a person.
Just my view.
Keep going, this is a form of creation of art with a few words.
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