Could it be a little more poetic?
On a rainy day
Drizzle washes away your desolation
Breathe calmly
Writing to the one you are falling with
People say Love is like
A delicate exotic fruit;
Touch it
And the bloom is gone
But they have not seen
The apparent interest of theirs’
In passion is complete pseudo
Grief ages us
If we do not believe in Love
No matter what happens
We believe in it
Even, till the very end
I can still smell
Your refreshing fragrant hair
When your soul
Like silent wings of an angel
Come shining through
It makes loving you
More than a dream comes true
Dance through waves of passion
All cross oceans
For a moment in time
I could feel I am free
There are waves of forgiveness and regret
And the first wave of true love
I will never forget
Lift your eyes and see the truth
Hold you in my arm and tonight, we see skies