菜鸟初登诗坛 多谢指教 [忆秦娥-------秋思寄亡友]

   实为菜鸟 缘思挚友故 冒然登出 不吝赐教   

                            

                                    忆秦娥-------秋思寄亡友

                     

                                          秋风至,

                                          花残叶落南飞雁.

                                          南飞雁,

                                          行行秋壮,

                                          倍添愁怅.

                                         天涯咫尺何时见,

                                         绵绵秋雨阴阳阻.

                                         阴阳阻,

                                         别离凄楚,

                                         诉说无处.