《The Naked Thinker 赤裸的思考者》

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The Naked Thinker

After one-hour brisk walk outside

Sweating

Back to inside

Clothes off

Naked

Sit on the white toilet

Black long hair on her smooth shoulders

Eyes closed

Hands holding her rosy cheeks and chin

Elbows on her laps

Enjoying the moment and

Thinking

What if all humans no longer need to wear clothes?

赤裸的思考者

在室外快步走了一个小时后

冒着汗

回到室内

脱掉衣服

赤裸着

坐在白色马桶上

黑色长发披在光滑的肩膀上

双眼闭着

双手托着红润的脸颊和下巴

双肘支撑在膝部上

一边享受着这一刻

一边思考

如果所有人都不再需要穿衣服会是什么样?

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这首诗于2024年12月23日被选上了Allpoetry的首页(Front Page Picks, FPP)。
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Comments from Allpoetry:

Shards of a soul - I do often think how nice it would be to not have to wear clothes, I think it would give some sense of freedom. Love the idea!

Politepotato77 - Lighthearted and humorous I think it's refreshing to find hidden gems such as this. Lovely. Amazing

Toffee Coffee - Nicely penned, good choice in words, good rhythm flow. Great job all together.

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