今天决定给城市的公交系统提点意见,大家看能不能懂我写的

有哪些地方表达不够清楚?

To Whom It May Concern:

At 9 pm, 10/24/05, I took bus route 41 at UCSD, the bus driver is a very polite and helpful young guy, I appreciate his service.

However, on the bus, there is no route diagram, and no place to show the name of the next bus stop, If you are a new arriver in this city, you know little about the city and you speak poor English, you are told by others that which bus stop you should get off, you will be nervous during the whole travel, keep thinking: what’s name is this stop, when should I be ready for getting off…especially in the night, you can even not see what outside is.

I am wondering, if people in charge of the bus system visit a foreign country, like Mexico, you speak little Spanish, you need to use the bus system there, and you are in a bus, without any information for the route, what would you feel?

I am not expecting to add more buses in this city, though I know that’s the hope of many poor people, however, I hope you can do something as I suggested above, and make new arrivers more convenient.

Thank you