七律-吾友新居

如果你也喜欢诗词、对联、谜语、音乐、美术,请来潇湘游子轩做客。
打印 被阅读次数

七律-吾友新居
---贺亦是先生乔迁 

窗嵌苍林藏鹿影,
门盈绿野覆蔬菱。
蓝天红霞丹青景,
细雨清风翰墨情。
兔跃虫鸣随梦近,
蛙声燕舞伴诗吟。
乔迁吉日主宾庆,
夏令新居楼苑馨。

亚特兰大笔会 发表评论于
土豆沙拉 评论于:2009-07-27 08:50:46 [回复评论]
游子的对联写得好,原来诗歌也如此棒,期待更多的作品。学习ing。


伍加 评论于:2009-07-24 14:30:00 [回复评论]
游子真是诗词高手,佩服!


诗坛 评论于:2009-07-24 08:42:44 [回复评论]
七律-吾友新居 -潇湘游子-
8226; 一语欣赏:同贺购产! 好看之极!形象丰富,有景有声音栩栩! -一语湖边_lakeshore-
8226; 吾友译诗严谨 古诗有律:好不佩服多多指点交流,谢谢介绍 歌手Do 歌? -一语湖边_lakeshore-
8226; 一语:希望与君有机会合作?看到好的大树一起攀援?谢介绍 Do 歌者自 -一语湖边_lakeshore-
8226; 恭贺乔迁 -鸣凡-
8226; 好诗!欣赏! -白玫瑰花-
8226; 高才!一首七律写尽居所里外风景,意象鲜明栩栩如生,读之如身历其境 -ling1984-
8226; 这么多动物:”兔跃虫鸣随梦近, 蛙声燕舞伴诗吟“ -秦照-
8226; 内外喜庆 -尚修心-


亦是 评论于:2009-07-23 16:00:38 [回复评论]
我已去鸣凡的博客拜读了他回应你的诗。
鸣凡的诗,是格律严整的五言律诗,平仄对仗,字字讲究。我的是不伦不类的打油体。真是惭愧!
代我问候他!


亦是 评论于:2009-07-23 15:12:22 [回复评论]
很高兴我的砖引出了玉!
游子的诗格律严谨,用词典雅,老夫只能是望洋兴叹:朽木不可雕,学不来了!


潇湘游子 评论于:2009-07-23 10:06:55 [回复评论]
亦是吾兄,诗坛有人同贺,请见:
http://web.wenxuecity.com/BBSView.php?SubID=poetry&MsgID=299252
鸣凡:《恭贺乔迁》
感悟林泉趣,居乡不眷城。
堂前悬淡墨,院后过山风。
野鹿识琴色,秋虫透韵声。
逍遥无雅饰,自在作家翁。
登录后才可评论.
Logo

Looks like your ad blocker is on.

×

We rely on ads to keep creating quality content for you to enjoy for free.

Please support our site by disabling your ad blocker.

Continue without supporting us

Choose your Ad Blocker

  • Adblock Plus
  • Adblock
  • Adguard
  • Ad Remover
  • Brave
  • Ghostery
  • uBlock Origin
  • uBlock
  • UltraBlock
  • Other
  1. In the extension bar, click the AdBlock Plus icon
  2. Click the large blue toggle for this website
  3. Click refresh
  1. In the extension bar, click the AdBlock icon
  2. Under "Pause on this site" click "Always"
  1. In the extension bar, click on the Adguard icon
  2. Click on the large green toggle for this website
  1. In the extension bar, click on the Ad Remover icon
  2. Click "Disable on This Website"
  1. In the extension bar, click on the orange lion icon
  2. Click the toggle on the top right, shifting from "Up" to "Down"
  1. In the extension bar, click on the Ghostery icon
  2. Click the "Anti-Tracking" shield so it says "Off"
  3. Click the "Ad-Blocking" stop sign so it says "Off"
  4. Refresh the page
  1. In the extension bar, click on the uBlock Origin icon
  2. Click on the big, blue power button
  3. Refresh the page
  1. In the extension bar, click on the uBlock icon
  2. Click on the big, blue power button
  3. Refresh the page
  1. In the extension bar, click on the UltraBlock icon
  2. Check the "Disable UltraBlock" checkbox
  1. Please disable your Ad Blocker
  2. Disable any DNS blocking tools such as AdGuardDNS or NextDNS

If the prompt is still appearing, please disable any tools or services you are using that block internet ads (e.g. DNS Servers).

Logo