Sentence Fragments in a Paragraph (段落中的病句)
Sometimes a sentence fragment may be difficult to identify识别 because it is part
of a paragraph. With other information around it, a fragment病句 may appear 出现to
have all the elements组成部分 of a sentence. Read the following paragraph from a
handbook手册 and see if you can identify the fragment.
The process程序方法 for store opening is easy to follow if you read
the manual指南 carefully. Most employees 雇员have no trouble with the
lock 锁system系统 and the cash register start-up开动. Instructions说明书
are clearly posted邮寄 in both locations. Printed印好的 in red ink. When
you arrive in the morning, be sure to allow yourself at least fifteen
minutes of preparation准备 time before you admit接待 customers.
The fragment is Printed in red ink. This group of words does not tell what is
printed in red ink. There is no subject to make it a sentence. You may infer推断
from the rest其他 of the paragraph that it is the instructions that are printed in red
ink. This is why fragments are a greater challenge to find when embedded 深入的in
a paragraph like this one.
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EDITING TIP 编辑的提示
Read the paragraph first. Then read each group of words separately分离地
and decide if the three elements组成部分 of a complete sentence are present.
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Let’s look at another example. Where is the fragment in this paragraph?
At the end of a business day, it is crucial that all employees
follow proper closing procedures. Section Two of the manual
outlines the necessary steps. Be sure to turn on the phone
answering system. When you have phoned in the last security
code. Activating使活动 safety安全 lights should be the last action动作
taken.
Here is the fragment in this paragraph:
When you have phoned in the last security code.
Although there is a subject, you, and a predicate谓语, have phoned in the last
security安全 code密码, a complete thought is not expressed表达. The
conjunction连词 when is what creates造成 the fragment here. We are left
wondering疑惑的 what happens when you have phoned in. Even though 即便如此
the information can be found in the paragraph, this group of words is still a
fragment because it cannot stand alone.
To make this fragment a complete sentence, you can connect连接 it to another
sentence from the paragraph.
Be sure to turn on the phone answering system when you have
phoned in the last security code.
(改正此病句只是把system与 when中间的句点去掉即可。)
