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文 飘尘永魂
大大小小的
排列在城市中
早已成为道道风景
虽然逐渐破旧
进出其间的人
越来越少
越来越老
无人在意
洪水已潜伏在城内
Boats
Large and small
Lining up in the city
They have made up a unique scene
Though gradually they worn out
People get in and out
Fewer and fewer
Older and older
No one cares
Flooding is lurking there
Translated by tern2
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飘尘永魂 发表评论于
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谢谢桐儿已改好！
谢谢桐儿已改好！
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诗人好。
关于题目：Boat 和 Boats可能都可以。Boats或许更好一些。
关于题目：Boat 和 Boats可能都可以。Boats或许更好一些。
飘尘永魂 发表评论于
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谢谢桐儿翻译，已经放在文中。
谢谢桐儿翻译，已经放在文中。
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cities->city
cities->city
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Large and small
Lining up in the cities
They have made up a unique scene
Though gradually they worn out
People get in and out
Fewer and fewer
Older and older
No one cares
Flooding is hiding there (Maybe you prefer the word "lurking")
Greetings!
Lining up in the cities
They have made up a unique scene
Though gradually they worn out
People get in and out
Fewer and fewer
Older and older
No one cares
Flooding is hiding there (Maybe you prefer the word "lurking")
Greetings!
飘尘永魂 发表评论于
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顺着杜姐的思路再想一想，你在的城市应该也有。
顺着杜姐的思路再想一想，你在的城市应该也有。
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谢谢杜姐来访，有些接近了。
谢谢杜姐来访，有些接近了。
~叶子~ 发表评论于
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和杜姐一样，我也没看懂。
飘尘，给我们解释一下吧。
和杜姐一样，我也没看懂。
飘尘，给我们解释一下吧。
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太深奥了没看懂
是讲蒙特利尔那些破破旧旧的房子？
是讲蒙特利尔那些破破旧旧的房子？
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