Dust
A stirring of dust
Dancing in the wind
Tells me in light we trust
Likes: Poettraveler, Daniel Roumell, O Amante, Jenny Middleton, Moss M. Jacques, Stuart Munro
Poettraveler -
An excellent poem - great depth of meaning in the description - well done indeed
19 days ago x
Daniel Roumell - in light we trust until the twinkling blanket of the night sky wraps us in the comforting distortion of darkness, whispering soft lies about mourning.
3 months ago x
Stuart Munro - Why do we have dust ? It’s not something we need , God
The world would be a better place without it , I wouldn’t have asthma lol
3 months ago x
Jenny Middleton - I like how visual your haiku is Bin Shan and there is a lovely sense of positivity about the ending.
5 months ago x
O Amante - Simple, short and yet it packs so much elegance and details. I could see the dust dancing in the air.
Amazing!
6 months ago x
