无题八句
身在这桥下只是一天
我却觉得已经过了千年
千年的红粉化作骷髅
千年的城池上升起轻烟
轻烟中花朵的魂魄翩翩
飞到西窗下的垂柳面前
垂柳看着谜一样的花朵
只是无声，只是无言
无胜于聊 发表评论于
写书出版吧，鲁智深攻城救美。
托宝猫 发表评论于
回复无胜于聊的评论:
恐怖里才能开出恶之花来……
恐怖里才能开出恶之花来……
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回复百步的评论:
鲁智深吃饱了狗肉才能来拔，请大家稍安勿躁……
鲁智深吃饱了狗肉才能来拔，请大家稍安勿躁……
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回复megchen的评论:
谢谢。I was just trying to IMPRESS, not to EXPRESS... hahahaha
谢谢。I was just trying to IMPRESS, not to EXPRESS... hahahaha
无胜于聊 发表评论于
好恐怖的城。放松点放松点。。。
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回复百步的评论:
hahahahaha, why wait 且听99回分解?
Sorry to be naughty in your home LZ! I know you are very genourous, aren't you! The world is so big, we need different voices.
hahahahaha, why wait 且听99回分解?
Sorry to be naughty in your home LZ! I know you are very genourous, aren't you! The world is so big, we need different voices.
百步 发表评论于
欲知鲁智深倒拔垂杨柳？且听99回分解
megchen 发表评论于
I have read it several times and tried to capture what you are trying to express.
The result is:
垂柳看着谜一样的花朵
只是无声，只是无言
I am the 垂柳, hahahahaha. Thanks for sharing! I like this poem.
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