写给你的诗

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写给你的诗 

我说

“写吧

写一首诗

为我 

你说
“我不会” 

为了我

写下了 

“你见过大海吗?
如果你是海
我一定是一条鱼 

你见过蓝天吗?
如果你是天
我一定是一朵云 

你见过群山吗?
如果你是山
我一定是一颗草 

你见过真爱吗?
如果你被爱过
爱你的人一定是我” 

我轻描淡写

“挺好 

你流泪了
没哭 

从此
杳无音信

若缺童子 发表评论于
妙在结尾含蓄."从此 杳无音信",做何解?我以为话外音更值得品味!!
壹枝 发表评论于
谢书龙兄,欢迎常来做客!!
金书龙 发表评论于
用的词在委婉些更好看
壹枝 发表评论于
谢太阳兄的好诗和评点,欢迎常来做客!!多多指点!!
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