红推车,
负载一何多。
清霑添釉彩,
(雨清添釉彩)
白羽绕轮歌。
(最后两句没对仗,待斟酌。不管平仄的话, "清雨添釉彩”和下句配合可能更有意思)
The Red Wheel Barrow
(by William Carlos Williams)
So much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rained
water
beside the white
chickens.
(by William Carlos Williams)
So much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rained
water
beside the white
chickens.