A-gain
She gave
me one
hard
look,
1000-kisses-
deep,
lips burning
imprinted
by murmuring,
close-knit
the knot
as xin-
jie,
all a-
flame
like licking
wound
or a broken
heart or
secrets
in loveless
season,
my poem
which
still drips
black
blood
as in music,
(verb over-
takes the
noun and
tense change):
not the final
thing
but her
own
way of
remembering,
and I trans-
late that
(to dream
deep)--
She puts
a smile
on all
she puts
her hand
to, like
now
my pen
she kisses
again.
:1/26/05
[art: by picasso]
LTG 发表评论于
yeah, i was playing with the word, a-gain....i agree!!
Yosemite 发表评论于
"A-gain"美;影云的诠释秒!
影云 发表评论于
精炼!!谢谢:)
A-GAIN,我觉得有双重意义:A GAIN, 或者AGAIN。
AGAIN 是在诗字面,如同破碎心,伤口,无爱之后的再次坠入 - - - “她再次亲吻
我的笔”
A GAIN在诗的意义,意味心的收获:爱,充实,快乐,平和 - - 在这里SHE不是
一个单纯的“她” - - - 可以是理想