Orchard Love’s the mystery of the soul’s own making that never ceases wakening the unsound senses.
Orchard (图)
Orchard Love’s the mystery of the soul’s own making that never ceases wakening the unsound senses.
LTG 发表评论于
mmmmmmm, sound better :)
爱
灵魂自身
创造的
神秘
永不停息地
唤醒
脆弱的
感知
:)
爱
灵魂自身
创造的
神秘
永不停息地
唤醒
脆弱的
感知
:)
影云 发表评论于
爱
灵魂自身
创造的
神秘
永不停息地
唤醒
脆弱的
理性
:)
灵魂自身
创造的
神秘
永不停息地
唤醒
脆弱的
理性
:)
LTG 发表评论于
yes, y.y.
you are right ... unsound does not only mean "soundless", it also means "unhealthy, unfound, frail, groundless, etc..."
yeah, a short poem is hard to translate because of the word choice, including pronounciation, metaphor, etc. etc..
you are right ... unsound does not only mean "soundless", it also means "unhealthy, unfound, frail, groundless, etc..."
yeah, a short poem is hard to translate because of the word choice, including pronounciation, metaphor, etc. etc..
影云 发表评论于
welcome:)
i am still thinking of "Unsound" which can mean "existing but not being found through sounds or uttering" - - - my understanding. "无声的" is more like "soundless".
those seemingly simple poems indeed are not easy to translate, requiring more "poetic precision". :) just a thought :)
i am still thinking of "Unsound" which can mean "existing but not being found through sounds or uttering" - - - my understanding. "无声的" is more like "soundless".
those seemingly simple poems indeed are not easy to translate, requiring more "poetic precision". :) just a thought :)
LTG 发表评论于
good job!!!
thanks, Y.Y.:)
thanks, Y.Y.:)
影云 发表评论于
果园
爱是
灵魂自己
创造的
神秘
永不停息地
唤醒
无声的
感知
爱是
灵魂自己
创造的
神秘
永不停息地
唤醒
无声的
感知
影云 发表评论于
Very nice!!
Simple, beautiful, and philosophical!!!
Simple, beautiful, and philosophical!!!
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