梦系列之: "meaning" (图)


梦系列之: meaning the air is thick heart chambers half-lit: something about you i can never get enough darkness travels marking territory longitude & latitude while fire enters you blooding churning bodies squirming songs deminishing love crying meaning meaning .... :: june 05
LTG 发表评论于
y.y. & z.f.

enjoy your translations!!!! you each captured different flavor of the "dream"!!

rc,

some dreams are easier to remeber than others, i think....there is the magic time when we first wake up in the morning, and if you keep your closed enough you'll recall the dream....

tell yourself before going to sleep "i will remember the dream!"

hi, miao! nice to meet you!
知凡 发表评论于
《含义》


空气浓浓
心房半燃
关于你的一些
我永不觉到足够

激情拥你
黑暗漫游
标示经纬
经过之地

血和血相融
身与体坐不能安
歌声渐轻
爱在呼喊
含义

含义
....

[“meaning” 一词太多“meanings”,可意会难言传……
如这首诗,每个人可读出不同的“meaning”,秒!
中文翻译很容易流于直白,不如英文原诗意味深长,我想这是英文诗的魅力吧……]

:)





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Wonderful !
by水滴 发表评论于
I always have problems to remember a dream, not even mention to interpret them.:)
影云 发表评论于
意义

空气凝重
心房
若明若暗:
你有些什么
我永无
止境
地渴望

黑暗前行
标记着版图
经度 纬度

在进入


血液沸腾
身体扭曲
歌声匿迹
爱在呐喊

意义



。。。
影云 发表评论于
blood[?] churning
bodies squirming
...
LTG 发表评论于
san ke you!!

:)

影云 发表评论于
"darkness travels
marking territory
longitude & latitude
while fire
enters you"

Breathtaking!!!
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