狗尾续貂:续风之痕的大作

这几天在走廊玩,发现风之痕竟然诗兴大发,让我如获至宝,愚续貂3段,抄录于此,以为记。

 

 

一年一味愁,梦里鬓边流;五年一回头,笑寻云中愁。(风之痕)
 
愁随云飘散,化作春水流。春水润物生,杨柳舞清风。

清风日渐暖,吹醒睡夏莲。莲蓬结秋实,桂香把酒添。

酒暖冬日寒,冰封梅昂然。四季皆为美,平凡最自然。


   

                    

 

 
 
比较慢,慢慢下

 
 
wiser56 发表评论于
嘿嘿!醋莲,等我成名了别那这些取笑我就好了!
网上书虫 发表评论于
严重统一莲子的检疫!!!:DDD
清水莲依 发表评论于
建议大葱收集好自己的点滴甘露,以后可以凑一本小册子赚钱,外加成名:)好让偶们也终於可以认识一回名人哈!
wiser56 发表评论于
这是学李白的3,5,7词,倒数第2句,改成,日日思君君不见,好一点!我那是逗“堕落了”玩呢!嘿嘿
轻柔 发表评论于
花堕落,鬓成霜,
难消愁思绪,仍念负心郎
日日思君君安知,有情总被无情伤

哥哥还会为其他小女子吐心声呢?女儿们的心思你又怎会猜得透呀。世上负心狼多了去了,总叫人咬牙切齿的恨也不是爱也不是,一个愿打一个愿挨呗,说不清楚谁伤了谁啊。若是真要怨个谁去,那就是没缘份,生不逢时,天不时地不利人不和。除了无奈,还能真的有什么起死回生之能力?日子还不就这么过了。
网上书虫 发表评论于
眼红了呗 *^_^*

见你在原创里又滴了几滴甘露,不收集下来?
wiser56 发表评论于
嘿嘿!柔MM怎么那么谦虚,其实走廊也有我这样灌水的混子,那里的文章其实是吓唬人的,也没什么的,怕什么?

虫儿MM点眼药水干吗?
轻柔 发表评论于
到走廊一游,才发现原创的有些文章简直是不能相提并论啊。俺在走廊连喘气的份儿都没有,屏着呼吸潜了半天。在苍天大树面前,俺把俺的小草藏藏好,小心被看到了丢人,呵呵
网上书虫 发表评论于
(摇摇头地说)国人谦虚的美德被你丧失殆尽...

不过这歌曲,这画面是很美哈,可这诗倒变成了陪衬,可惜呀(吃不到葡萄者都这么说话的,嘿嘿)...

偶也发现葱G诗才了得,一张口就哗哗的冒水(^_^),虫子是PF的五体投地,所以昨天才有了正版这一说涅。

虫子今天良性发现,决定不偷你这改版后的赝品了,啦啦啦……(虫子去点些眼药水)
wiser56 发表评论于
自恋一下,GG 啥都会!嘿嘿
清水莲依 发表评论于
呵呵,柔MM也动了凡心了,想当村姑了吗?:)

发现大葱整个就是一诗人哈。。。怎么版权是虫子的吗?打赌这盗版的比你那正版的搞得漂亮哈~~~~~
轻柔 发表评论于
哟,这么漂亮呀,去这里放牛俺都愿意
网上书虫 发表评论于
嘿嘿嘿!虫子先下手为强,版权在偶手里。:))

不过这貂续的粉不错哈,春夏秋冬,岁岁年年,平和闲适的小日子,整个一老婆孩子热炕头的精品版,嘻嘻!
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