R U a prisoner of TIME?? (图)


 TIME

nonspatial

continuum

irreversible

 succession

past-present-future

interval

separating points

duration

 war

 minutes

 reckoned

solar
 span

 conditions

 phenomena

era

hard

 +

troubles

prevailing

trends

self

nonbeing

selfless

water

0

change
opportune

moment or season

taking stock
designated

activity

harvest

 bed

words

love

appointed

 fated 

death

 birth

multiplied or divided

engagement

certain occasion

apprenticeship

sentence
rate

 speed

 measured

 marching

 in double  
music

three-quarter

the tempo
constructed

payable

unthinkable

indissoluable

here

there

be

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y.y. 发表评论于
so, that's why they're interested in National Geography . . .

remember, the English Patient ?

they can colonize external Land but not internal one . . . :)

maybe i am wrong :)

Only "rebels" look into their hearts and soul :)

z.z. 发表评论于
why not british??

:)

remember, the british were the oldest colonialists....
影云 发表评论于
maybe french or american :)
should not be british :)

LTG 发表评论于
like all your comments ..... you all inspire me to say more even though i am working now :)

"gaze" has been a big subject in film studies, which overlaps a lot with lit...

modern technology has turned people into visual animals.....

considering the time when that foto was taken, i am positive that it must have been taken by an European or American ....

what comes in mind now??

Orientalism!!!!!
知凡 发表评论于
"real art, like this foto, is to reveal a soulful and real moment between humans...."

!!!!!!!!

can't agree with you more.....
影云 发表评论于
i personally think, what's beneath Feminism is the awakening of senses and to live to her fullest of life as a woman, as a Man (interesting, when i put Man here), more than asking for "being equal" . . . a man who does not search for his soul is still "inferior" and new to his internal landscape . . . such as Joe Wu in your novel . . .

this photo is classic, not only because it was taken back then and historical, but it captures something in which words are meaningless . . . as i always say, the beauty of mystery . . . depending on our imagination to "interpret" it . two little fawns see their reflections in each other's eyes on the surface of water . . .
作舟诗集 发表评论于
"...另外这张照片的场景在窗边,很有意味,窗户,眼睛也是窗户,还有窗户的形状,这样的方格形状,透过拘束,Boy的眼神,Nude 露出的是上半身。。。如果换成全裸,会是什么效果???..."

well said!!!

in lit studies and film studies, the male/female gaze was the earlier, but the most important element that caters human curiosity.....

so, commercial films are to attract people's eyes only....not much of their heart and soul.....

real art, like this foto, is to reveal a soulful and real moment between humans....

the boundary between trash and art sometimes is very thin.....even ambiguous...

thanx a lot!!!
知凡 发表评论于
“modern lit. & visual productions used to be dominated by male gaze, that is, female is being looked at, like an object....”

所以那些是productions。。。“There are fundamental differences between/Creation and production” “A ‘product’ has no internal value”。。。

另外,仔细看摄影里Boy 和 Nude 的眼神很不一样,但是却互通。。。就像作舟的诗里,看不到neighbor girl’s 眼神,但是诗歌里画面的描述是一双眼睛所敞开的窗户,窗内的美“burned /my stealing/eyes”。。。而此时从诗里看到的除了窗内的美,更看到一双眼睛,就像那个Nude所凝视的那双眼睛。。。再读诗歌的第一节。。。

(gaze一下,这首诗与这张摄影在一起很秒不可言。。。)
知凡 发表评论于
这幅照片里,是一个Boy 和一个 Nude还有他们的肤色, 如果换成成人的Male, Female,或换成别的肤色,想想会是什么效果??? 这张照片里我以为更体现了男女平等发生在同样 innocent的眼睛之间。。。这张照片震动我的是自然与一样 innocent 的眼睛,自然的 Boy 和自然的 Nude,他们的姿态和眼神的自然与和谐,毫不设防,传达着某种难以言明的交流,抑或什么都没有交流,只是一个瞬间的美。。。使照片很传神,神即很原始很自然的一种不设防,这种瞬间发生在一个健康的 Boy 和一个健康的 Nude之间。。。一个“健康”的Boy这样看一个Nude很自然,一个“健康”的Nude没有任何羞涩或忸怩,为什么?其实以女人的心态来说,渴望被gaze and gaze back,但是前提是对什么样的眼睛和眼神,对象很重要,你们看到过那种眼睛吗?让你们有愿望可以赤裸裸而无所拘束快乐表达“野性”的眼睛。。。这张照片里包含了很多未言明的美感与吸引。。。另外这张照片的场景在窗边,很有意味,窗户,眼睛也是窗户,还有窗户的形状,这样的方格形状,透过拘束,Boy的眼神,Nude 露出的是上半身。。。如果换成全裸,会是什么效果???所以希望,希望在哪里?男女平等在阳光下怎么可能???即使在夜里,现代人多是“各怀鬼胎”,少有不设防的“纯净”,怎么可能男女平等???即使在窗户边也是一个 Boy and Nude。。。The fuel of hope is innocence...

作舟的诗抓住了这张照片的关键,表达了一个 Nature Boy 的自然,诗人这样不设防的回忆,给我的感觉很艺术很美很动人,什么都没有多想,只是觉得那一刻很自然。。。
LTG 发表评论于
the female nude gazing back in the foto seems very interesting to me....

modern lit. & visual productions used to be dominated by male gaze, that is, female is being looked at, like an object....

part of feminist lit. was to "gaze back," right??

i was struck by the time when the foto was taken, and the gazing back of the nude....male is not dominant, but only a boy figure who looks inncently....

thus, my own memory ... :)

thanx!
影云 发表评论于
love the purity of the poem . . .vividly and naturally
capturing the atmosphere
of the ineffable moment
of gazing - - - eyes'
soundless communicating

cannot help changing Philippe Denis' poem
as the following - - - some feeling alike


"daylight confession . . .into
the teeth of time . . ."
作舟诗集 发表评论于
文学城又出毛病了??

thanx, zf, for your artistic response!!!!

that vintage foto definitely inspired me......taken in 1915!!!!

can't believe it!!!!
知凡 发表评论于
文学城又出毛病了, 你楼上的新诗无法发表评论。。。

就像那幅很美的摄影一样,你的新诗也是,非常ART,非常美。。。喜欢!!!
我读到美酒的味道:)

我喜欢这类艺术。。。soft eyes... tender heart... Nature boy!!!

These are colors of
infinity leading me on
a Voyage towards
a simple lesson:
Love is what keeps
it going . . . .

thank you for sharing your ART...

more later...

cheers!!!
LTG 发表评论于
hi LZ, ZF,

good to see you blog on Sunday ....:)

i was indeed inspired from learning about fractals.....

realization: there is much to be learned....

thanx!!
知凡 发表评论于
看到新意的东西很开心,读到这首NEW STYLE的诗我有点兴奋。。。全诗的每一个字,每一个字都很有意蕴。。。读,且读,还有节奏,音乐,是人声的音乐,最后的 O m 〈〈〈〈... 余音绕梁,三日不绝:)))

“you mean the "devil" or the "beast?"

a Beast with a Tender Heart :)

“guess you have seen the connection between this poem and my post about" fractals" downstairs.....”

穿透鸿蒙是我读完后的一种感觉,我找不到合适的WORDS,所以“魔鬼般”用的是引号, 因为找不到合适的 WORD。。。imagination 需要new language … OM…

确实,这首诗的美感与your post about“fractals”有connection…

你诗歌的ART 越来越 ART 了:) 我很欣赏的那种 TASTE AND STYLE,...瞧,我又找不到合适的 WORDS…
律周 发表评论于
时间的无始终,空间的无垠,可爱的球.
作舟诗集 发表评论于
yy,zf & sd,

all your reading and interpretation about OM are amamzingly insightful....!!!

great minds think alike!!

i assume you all have googled the word OM....

:)

zf: "...每个字逃脱了束缚,逃脱了时间..."

your view here is also my "goal" in writing this from looking up te definition of time....

this is also a "found" poem, i should add...

"...对我来说,整首诗读来像首随想曲,发出“魔鬼般”的意蕴..."

:)))

you mean the "devil" or the "beast?"

:)

穿透鸿蒙....

guess you have seen the connection between this poem and my post about" fractals" downstairs.....

cheers to you all!!

by水滴 发表评论于
O~~~M. Nami~Bani~ HO~~M~~~~
优胜美地 发表评论于
"_ O m _"
知凡 发表评论于
“thus, the foolish poem....haha....!!!”

哈哈,这种诗好适合我这种“foolish”的人的胃口。。。我一直很喜欢你那些每行字少的诗,仿佛特别,很有能量的感觉。。。对我来说,整首诗读来像首随想曲,发出“魔鬼般”的意蕴:)))。。。蕴涵丰富无尽联想和领悟但是诗歌给我以透明的质感。。。

每个单字独立,但是读来非常连贯。。。

每一个字或几个相连的字在这首连贯的篇章里,都可采撷,再作一首歌。。。(我是指以这里的意蕴。。。)

每个字逃脱了束缚,逃脱了时间,为individual。。。但是又被某种“无形”联系在一起,成为一首诗,带来一种穿透力的诗。。。读来很舒爽。。。

诗里有很多可解读的趣味。。。喜欢最后的 “O m”, 读来像是于末了发出的一声很惬意的声音,传递着“新概念”,“_ _ O m”的新概念… 于TIME里,一切不复,“O m”生生不息。。。

? - imagination – language – imagination – new language – imagination …… - ?

如果 language 不限定在语言,而是表达表意表达感觉或意识等等的任何一种形式。。。“language is the needle”,穿透鸿蒙。。。如果不是TIME 的prisoner ,世界对他来说,皆为“混沌”,所以整首诗读来给我有种穿透力的感觉。。。
影云 发表评论于
no a single medium is good enough for imagination. . . :)
作舟诗集 发表评论于
language made imagination possible?

or

vice versa??

:)

thanx!
影云 发表评论于
z.z. yes! love what you said here and enjoy reading this experimental work!

we can, at least, we try to visualize everything around us, visible or invisible, tangible or intangible, of form or formless. . . through feeling and imagination, the Gift. . . . e.g. when we say time, "irreversible', that's just because we, as individual, cannot see recurrences in our life; however, to the eyes of “history”, birth and death are recurring, things like mistakes or wars are repeating . . . stories always there, but carried on by different individuals from the same group of living creatures, that we call humankind . . . endless journeys witnessed by Time . . . or something we call Time.
作舟诗集 发表评论于
thanx, y.y.!!

"conceptualism" has its interesting elements.....but, it's made of "words" after all.... :)

"time" is one of those intriguingconcepts that can make us sound quite "foolish" at times.... :)

can we visualize "time?" etc...

thus, the foolish poem....haha....!!!

[...have a great wknd, everybody!!]
影云 发表评论于
非常喜欢这首诗歌的集中性与散发性,抓住了时间的特性,非常VISUAL!!!感受到
时光如在某个宇宙的隧道里如洪一样。。。时间,无岸的河,携带着种种。。。各
种声音汇入与流淌,成为历史。。。irreversible。。。但在REACHING SOMEWHERE。。。。
结尾犹如来自SOURCE的呼唤或回声。。。
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