步出影院
步出影院
和影子一起
狠很的伤感着
为故事里的
也为自己
崭新的裙子
倒印在雨洼里
五彩的线条
只剩了灰黑白的印记
为了看喜剧
时间不允许
悲剧的力量
总是超出我的承受能力
不想安排
可，总是那么刻意
步出影院
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I think we tend to like the same writers: WuMan, MengNv, RuMeng, Yuqing... I asked myself if I was attracted to their poems because they are female. The answer was "No" :) I can honestly say this because I am not attracted to those male writers with a female ID :) I do occasionally find good poems from male writers, but not as consistent as from female writers. I think females express themselves more open.
I will provide some opinion to your poems when I see proper, both positive and negative. Don't worry, I will not pretend to be a superior poet when I do it, I will offer my opinion for your reference only.
A poet can write in many differnt styles. But some people seem get offended if a poem does not "conform" with their single style. Sometimes, people get to excited by one aspect they know a little, and overlook all other aspects that they know little. (There are other brave hearts who dare to comment on things they know nothing!) When someone heard the theory that poem should not have comma, period..., he would attempt to erase them all from other people's poems :) The problem is that they assume their opinions are the best. Once this assumption is made, what is the purpose for further discussion? My approach is to share opinions without seeking an agreement.
Well, I have talked a lot without offering any opinion about your poems yet :) But I will provide feedback in the future as a reader who appreciate your skills.
I will provide some opinion to your poems when I see proper, both positive and negative. Don't worry, I will not pretend to be a superior poet when I do it, I will offer my opinion for your reference only.
A poet can write in many differnt styles. But some people seem get offended if a poem does not "conform" with their single style. Sometimes, people get to excited by one aspect they know a little, and overlook all other aspects that they know little. (There are other brave hearts who dare to comment on things they know nothing!) When someone heard the theory that poem should not have comma, period..., he would attempt to erase them all from other people's poems :) The problem is that they assume their opinions are the best. Once this assumption is made, what is the purpose for further discussion? My approach is to share opinions without seeking an agreement.
Well, I have talked a lot without offering any opinion about your poems yet :) But I will provide feedback in the future as a reader who appreciate your skills.
壹枝 发表评论于
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thanks a lot for the kindly thoughts, now, I truely feel it!
I wish I could do a better job, then, you might come more often:))
You are always more than welcome to give me some sharp feedback :))
thanks a lot for the kindly thoughts, now, I truely feel it!
I wish I could do a better job, then, you might come more often:))
You are always more than welcome to give me some sharp feedback :))
Stat 发表评论于
You may never notice this. But I want to let you know I visited. I like this one.
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