put my pen in your hand write a line from east to west --- hoping it'll never end . . . the summer wind whispering for a long- lost friend . . . though the footprints are quick to disappear on the ocean sand . . . i want to put my words in your gun aiming at the center of a weaker heart --- this longing this love will never wane . . . O, shooting star on this silent land i want to sing my human song on your burning wings . . . . . . .
z.z. 2006 + [painting by Laura Ferguson]
秋菱 发表评论于
我想
在你的
手掌
留下我的
诗行
希望 --- 从东写到西
永不换行
夏日的微风
仿佛一个久无音信的老友
送来的窃窃私语
尽管
海滩上的
足迹
消失得
那么
匆忙
我想
把诗句
推上你的枪膛
瞄准
那一颗
脆弱的
心脏
这份渴望
这种爱
永远不会
衰败
哦,流星
如此宁静的
原野上,我想
把凡人的歌
送上你
燃烧
的翅膀
地中海人鱼 发表评论于
again, an excellent poem!!!
y.y. 发表评论于
还喜欢这副画,土地的感觉。 。 。让人信任。。。
y.y. 发表评论于
the more i read, the more i love . . .
~&~ 发表评论于
thanks YY for sharing your translation!!!! like the way you keep the short lines/rhythm, etc....
cool!!!
found the painting by accident when goooooggling .... :)
goodday!!
y.y. 发表评论于
love this poem very much!!!
the painting is my type too! the intimacy, the bronze-look-and-feel. . .eternity . . .