Let the Starlight Burn
Let the starlight burn
On a dark Friday night
In my pitch black eyes
Is your secret light
The waving smoke twisting
At the longed-for site
I scream for the shooting star
At the forbidden height
Let the Starlight Burn
舞曼西楼 发表评论于
金秋君，我是这把它翻成中文，也许能帮助您理解？谢谢
让行星之光燃烧
在这黑暗的星期五晚上
在我漆黑的眼睛里
映着你神秘的目光
蜿蜒的烟波缠绵着
那个渴望到达的地方
我在被文明禁止的高处
呼唤着那颗发射的彗星
让行星之光燃烧
在这黑暗的星期五晚上
在我漆黑的眼睛里
映着你神秘的目光
蜿蜒的烟波缠绵着
那个渴望到达的地方
我在被文明禁止的高处
呼唤着那颗发射的彗星
独立金秋 发表评论于
Thanks for your speedy answer. Maybe, I didn't state my questions clearly. I would like to know:
1. What is "the waving smoke"? What are you refering it to?
2. What is "the longed-for site"? Is it a country, place or something in your mind?
I believe that you have specific meanings for these expressions in your mind. However, it is difficult for readers to understand. That's why I have questions for you.
Still, I appreciate your poems and enjoy reading them.
Have a nice day.
1. What is "the waving smoke"? What are you refering it to?
2. What is "the longed-for site"? Is it a country, place or something in your mind?
I believe that you have specific meanings for these expressions in your mind. However, it is difficult for readers to understand. That's why I have questions for you.
Still, I appreciate your poems and enjoy reading them.
Have a nice day.
舞曼西楼 发表评论于
金秋君好！您的表扬，我当之有愧。
周五没什么特殊的意义，一般周五is time for bad behaviors
Is用动词会好些。比如说sparkle, twinkle...
waving smoke 指扭曲的。。。
longed-for 指渴望到达的。。。
这首诗是特指的，所以不知道所指，就比较难懂：）
周五没什么特殊的意义，一般周五is time for bad behaviors
Is用动词会好些。比如说sparkle, twinkle...
waving smoke 指扭曲的。。。
longed-for 指渴望到达的。。。
这首诗是特指的，所以不知道所指，就比较难懂：）
独立金秋 发表评论于
能用英文写诗，足见舞曼的英文水平之高。 我有几处不明白，请诗人示下。
为什么是周五的夜晚？有特别的意义吗？
Is your secret light 里的 Is 如果用一个动词是否会更好？
The waving smoke 是指什么？
the longed-for site 又是指什么？
别嫌我笨啊！
为什么是周五的夜晚？有特别的意义吗？
Is your secret light 里的 Is 如果用一个动词是否会更好？
The waving smoke 是指什么？
the longed-for site 又是指什么？
别嫌我笨啊！
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