Earlier chapter said that Jia Lan wounded someone, not kill. So this wounded one was done by Jia Lan?
拥林 发表评论于
回复datuzi的评论:
It's not necessary 忠顺亲王是李寿成一伙的. 忠顺亲王是皇上的皇家兄弟, the reason he didn't want to go to the war might be he had grave concern over 立储大事, so he wanted to stay in the capital to help his favorite candidate, who could be any 皇子. 宫廷权场 is very complicated, people ally with each other based on their interests. Even 南王 may not hold grudge for his son's failing to 偷纳一妾.
jiajia07 发表评论于
回复wumiao的评论:
Miao Mei Mei, your revision looks perfect.
jiajia07 发表评论于
"朱英就跪下,一句话也说不出..."
Zhu Ying already knelt down, according to an earlier sentence "变成醉红,只跪下谢道..."
jiajia07 发表评论于
回复wumiao的评论:
Miao Mei Mei, I know you can dynamically revise and polish the story here :-) You know our goal is the same - we would like your story to be perfect and be our favorite from any perspective. Thanks very much for your prompt efforts to make the story perfect. And thanks very much for considering our thoughts.
We should have more discussions. Everyone should be more active in the discussions. That will make our reading journey even more fun. Meanwhile, it will make our waiting time more fun and less nervous :-)
kindness 发表评论于
回复datuzi的评论:
呵呵,暗藏的阶级敌人真多!
datuzi 发表评论于
忠顺亲王,南王,兵部尚书李寿成都是一伙的,敌我力量悬殊。现在刀都架在脖子上了。
pinkkiwi 发表评论于
回复我似浮云独自游的评论:
agree. but let's get the baby first.
pinkkiwi 发表评论于
回复littlehedgehog的评论:
yes, that's him. "将在外君命有所不受。我不听他的,是因为他太听从别人的." "别人" should be 忠顺亲王.
Seems that Li Fei wants Shui Rong to be killed, or she lost her position in front of her father and her aunt Queen, or she cannot control the situation? If people were sent from the capital aiming to kill Shui Rong, curious whether Li Fei knows it or not.
jiajia07 发表评论于
“别管他们---你让我怕死了,也想死了我。”
Should Shui Rong first comfort Dai Yu for earlier attack? Dai Yu never saw battle before.
jiajia07 发表评论于
"打开让黛玉和紫鹃吃了些..."
Some people are coming. Should Dai Yu and Zi Juan be sent to the secret place right away, instead of having food first?
datuzi 发表评论于
回复jiajia07的评论:
Thank you! ^_^
pinkkiwi 发表评论于
回复littlehedgehog的评论:
don't worry, 黛玉已经是中期的五个多月了,水溶不会让黛玉骑马的. but next episode, i think there is a big fighting.