[七律]回首自嘲(步韵谢诗盗)

木石有约,不负前盟; 红尘万丈,不枉此生.
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[七律] 回首自嘲  步韵答谢诗盗兄 雨清(04/20/07)

未约紫微入命宫,
谁拈豆蔻笑东风.
欣偿故梦悄飞陕,
竞探黄龙忽入蓉.
南国青梅圆邂逅,
西城白浪碎重逢.
今宵眼下杯中水,
知我怜它为我浓.

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原作:每年约莫此时都会祝贺雨清生日,眼看著四月就过.雨清生日快乐。诗盗喜裸评07-04-19 12:44:41

黄道十二第一宫,绿映欣欣掬好风。
犹记佳人清丽影,红妆蝶梦印芙蓉。
参辰未识殊途别,日月相惜岂相逢。
尔汝芝兰淡如水,芬芳姿态雅情浓

雨清 发表评论于
谢谢金秋兄和诗及祝福:)也收藏了:)

您的"命里有情难寂莫,心中无悔易从容"之句, 读来很是感触.
最怕是"命里有情终寂寞,心中无泪渐从容"啊...

谢金秋兄的"一杯水酒", Cheers:)))
独立金秋 发表评论于
啊呀,写错字了。是“雨清”。
独立金秋 发表评论于
你一定游玩过许多地方,好羡慕啊!

刚查到你的生日是4月12日。乱和了一首,请笑纳,别嫌晚呀。

春生踏入白羊宫
娉娉婷婷沐暖风
命里有情难寂莫
心中无悔易从容
称兄道妹网前聚
把盏擎樽月下逢
为祝雨晴生日乐
一杯水酒不需浓
雨清 发表评论于
回金秋兄的话: 都不是:) 只是周游玩儿而已,印象都还挺深的.

长安和蓉城等地都堪称人杰地灵哦.:-)
独立金秋 发表评论于
小雨是陕西人还是四川人那?
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