我也试着改译了,请批评指正!

回答: > 英译 version 2 由 zgob 于 2008-05-19 10:27:36
“dead or alive”一般地说用在贬意的时候比较多。我擅自给你改了一下。你看看

生死不离
Never Apart

王平久
Translated by 中国傲吧 (www.zgob.com)

生死不离,你的梦落在哪里。
想着生活继续,天空失去了美丽,
你却等待梦在明天站起。
你的呼喊刻在我的血液里

Always together, dead or alive
(Forever together, never apart)
Where did your dream go
(Where are your dreams?)
As life continues, the sky becomes gloomy
(Life goes on in the gray universe)
You look for the dreams of tomorrow
(You’re waiting for dreams to come )
Your cries forever in my blood flow
(Your voices are in my heart always )

Forever together, never apart!
Where are your dreams going?
Life has to go on, but the sky never be the same
You're looking for the dreams to come
Your voices are in my heart always
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生死不离,我数秒等你的消息。
相信生命不息,与你祈祷一起呼吸
我看不到你却牵挂在心里,
你的目光是我全部的意义!

Always together, dead or alive
(Forever together, never apart)
I wait for word of you every second
(I’ll be forever waiting for you )(英语有进行时,可以用来表示“数秒”)
I pray with you that we breathe together
(Life goes on in our prayers)(可以用“our”来表示“together”)
Believing life never ends
My heart is with you, where can you be?
(Can’t see you, but know you’re there)(歌词有诗意,可以想象一下)
And your eyes are the whole world to me
(Can’t hear you, but know you’re seeing me)

Forever together, never apart
I am counting seconds to wait for you
Life never ends, let's pray together!
Can’t see you, but know you’re there
Seeing you is all life to me!
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无论你在哪里,我都要找到你。
血脉能创造奇迹,生命是意义
无论你在哪里,我都要找到你。
手拉着手,生死不离

Wherever you are, I will find you
(No matter where you are, I’ll find you)(“Wherever you are”被电影Titanic搞得家喻户晓啦!不知有没有版权问题)
The bond (of blood) makes miracles
(The line of family brings life)(英语没有“血脉”这个概念,不太容易表达)
Life means eve'ything, for which we strive
(Life is the meaning of all)
Wherever you are, I will find you
(No matter where you are, I’ll find you)
Hand in hand, together always, dead or alive
(Hand in hand, forever together, never apart)

No matter where you are, I have to find you
Blood bond always creates miracles. That's life!
No matter where you are, I have to find you
Hand in hand, forever together, never apart
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生死不离,全世界都被沉寂
痛苦也不哭泣,爱是你的传奇,
彩虹在风雨后渐渐升起。
我的努力看到爱的力气!
无论你在哪里,我都要找到你!
血脉能创造奇迹,大山毅然举起
无论你在哪里,我都要找到你。
天裂了,去缝起
你一丝希望是我的全部意义
搭起我的手筑成你回家的路基!!!

Always together, dead or alive
(Forever together, never apart )
When the world is silenced
(Till the world is still)
We shed no tears though in pain
(I’ve no tears and feel no pain )
For love is your legend
(Your love is forever)
Rainbows are rising after wind and rain
(Rainbow appears through the storm)
I see love's strength in search of you
(Your love's power shining through me)
Wherever you are, I will find you
(No matter where you are, I’ll find you)
The bond (of blood) makes miracles, mountains rise again
(The line of family brings life, even to the stones)(这个比喻在英语容易理解一些)
Wherever you are, I will find you
(No matter where you are, I’ll find you)
If the sky breaks, we will sew it
(Even if the rainbow fells, we’ll pick it up)(这个比喻在英语容易理解一些)
Your glimmer of hope is what life is to me
(Being with you is the meaning of all)
Your road home is what my hands will be
(My bare hands will the road to home)

Forever together, never apart
Time stops now!
No tears for pain. Love can help.
Rainbow appears through the storm
Love is the power.
No matter where you are, I have to find you
Blood bond always creates miracles. Mountains can be lifted with my hands.
No matter where you are, I have to find you
The sky is tore apart, but we can sew it again
You are all life to me
My bare hands build the road to home


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无论你在哪里,我都要找到你。
血脉能创造奇迹,生命是命题
无论你在哪里,我都要找到你。
手拉着手,生死不离

Wherever you are, I will find you
(No matter where you are, I’ll find you)
The bond (of blood) makes miracles
(The line of family will brings life)
Life is a theme, on which we thrive
(Life is the meaning of all)
Wherever you are, I will find you
(No matter where you are, I’ll find you)
Hand in hand, together always, dead or alive
(Hand in hand, forever together, never apart)


No matter where you are, I have to find you
Blood bond always creates miracles. That is life.
No matter where you are, I have to find you
Hand in hand, forever together, never apart

>>

无论你在哪里,我都要找到你!
血脉能创造奇迹,大山毅然举起
无论你在哪里,我都要找到你。
无论你在哪里,我都要找到你。
天裂了,去缝起
手拉着手,生死不离!!!

Wherever you are, I will find you
(No matter where you are, I’ll find you)
The bond (of blood) makes miracles, mountains rise again
(The line of family brings life, even to the stones)
Wherever you are, I will find you
(No matter where you are, I’ll find you)
Wherever you are, I will find you
(No matter where you are, I’ll find you)
If the sky breaks, we will sew it
(Even if rainbow fells, we’ll pick it up)
Hand in hand, together always, dead or alive!!!
(Hand in hand, forever together, never apart)

No matter where you are, I have to find you
Blood bond always creates miracles. Mountains can be lifted with my hands.
No matter where you are, I have to find you
No matter where you are, I have to find you
The sky is tore apart, but we can sew it again
Hand in hand, forever together, never apart
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