critisism on a portrait of 施特罗家族

Although technique is well, the design of portrait on wall of Stroh's room is so-so: it is all encircled without enough space and an outlet; It is too repetitious without a sense of good rhythm; and more. 从亿万到家徒四壁：
施特罗家族肖像
虽然技术不错，斯特罗房间的肖像设计马马虎虎：所有包围没有足够的空间和出口; 没有良好的节奏感,太啰嗦;等等