Fingertips kissing fingertips thru un- known spheres-- waves in space: ... Heart flooding with signs: ... Truth is pulse in the line in the vein in vain.
But: keep knocking it away ver ..ti ...cal .....ly .........
Words fly out of the bird. Birds fly out of her. Her is in my heart.
More. More more. More.
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z.z. 2005
地中海人鱼 发表评论于
hard to recognise,pls adjust the color of the background...
影云 发表评论于
BA客气,翻译这首诗,非常有趣,比较有挑战性:)
LTG 发表评论于
zf:
...
墨。脉
脉。墨。
[very creative!!! like this word-play a lot!!!!]
yy:
但:
不停地
将它
敲离
。
纵
。向
。。飞
。。。离
。。。。。
[i like this too...!!!]
i know the title could be difficult to translate.....
thank you both!!! enjoy reading them in Chinese!!
知凡 发表评论于
But:
keep knocking
it away
ver
..ti
...cal
.....ly
.........
sounds, far off,
of wings fluttering
slow pulsing in the vein
soundless loving kissing
whispering & waving
~ ~ ~
out of some
quietness
(eg: deep
into darkness)
. . .