"We can do no great things,
but small things with great love."
---Mother Teresa
y.y. 发表评论于
indeed i love the last stanza . . . "awkard" and surprise, making me laugh . . . love the "ugly fish" . . . very interesting !!!
y.y. 发表评论于
过於从诗歌里寻求“大意思”，就会失去些什么，感觉吧
y.y. 发表评论于
yes, playing words . . .:)
作舟诗集 发表评论于
thanks, zf!!
i find myself getting tired of all the pretentious seriousness in writing, not just others' ... myself included ....
it has to feel real and right when right writes "serious" stuff.....at least for oneself.....
poetry, like other kinds of art form, should be fun to read, writie, i think...
that was why i was attracted by Henry Miller's style of writing .... his books are full of black springs, but his sense of humor/optimism helped him deal with the dark side of humanity.....
z.f. 发表评论于
I really like the Humor here:
LOVE
Is a sinking
Boat
Beautifully floating
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
A he and a she
Or
A she and a she
Or
A he and a he
etc. etc.
Busy mending
Leaks
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