一轮新月,婀娜轻舞,微闭朦胧杏眼。
秋风不谙枫林愁,叶飘落,纷纷片片。
孤独视线,伥然问月,可否成全今晚?
月圆赏叶叶漂零,幸福泪,今宵无憾!
(平)平(仄)仄,(平)平(仄)仄,(仄)仄(平)平(仄)仄(韵)。
(平)平(仄)仄仄平平,仄(仄)仄、平平(仄)仄(韵)。
原玉 “将近中秋” by 风丽:
孤独的视线
倔强地拉着新月
拉着她
睁开微闭的眼
圆圆的
圆圆的
共我赏叶
片片落叶
片片落叶圆
一轮新月,婀娜轻舞,微闭朦胧杏眼。
秋风不谙枫林愁,叶飘落,纷纷片片。
孤独视线,伥然问月,可否成全今晚?
月圆赏叶叶漂零,幸福泪,今宵无憾!
(平)平(仄)仄,(平)平(仄)仄,(仄)仄(平)平(仄)仄(韵)。
(平)平(仄)仄仄平平,仄(仄)仄、平平(仄)仄(韵)。
原玉 “将近中秋” by 风丽:
孤独的视线
倔强地拉着新月
拉着她
睁开微闭的眼
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