请指出我下面的贴有什嗎错。发表数次都被小便立即删了！
党组组华裔老人倒垃圾遭枪击身亡 嫌犯终于落网
党组组长 发表评论于 2017-11-23 16:59:51
诚挚哀悼！
老人永远活在这城里人的心中！
节哀，如果这话还有点用的话。
我的经历：
Tuesday morning at a bus stop on the side way around 8:40 a black with a old bike struck me intentionally. He passed me and then turned back on my way riding his bike and knocked me down on the ground! I felt very hurt physically and emotionally! I reported to 311 but did not get his bike ID. What should I do? Doctors said if I fall down I would never get up again, drop dead! but I survived this time. That was a miracle. What should I do further?
I remember the black's face though.
Later on I saw the black several times.
The police already has the incident on file.
But i really dare not to go ahead to deal with blacks.
-老年痴呆
